Possible formats for organizing your essay:

 

Thesis up front:

Statement of belief

Story of how you came to believe what you do

Comments on how that story relates to your beliefs

Finding Equality Through Logic

All Things Are Interconnected

            Power of Hello

Backing into your point

Personal context

Story that shows why you believe as you do

Statement of your belief followed by explanation of how it relates to your story

Our Vulnerability is Our Strength

Logical format

Start with thesis

List your reasons and explain them

Elaborate if necessary to drive your point home

"Teaching a Bad Dog New Tricks."